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請教各位文學專家，這樣的文句是否具有詩意？

Aug 12th 2013, 16:06

我要升高中了，自感於作文的平庸，最近開始讀白靈的「一首詩的誕生」，以期提升作文的質感，也希望進而能創作一些小詩。我依照第一章「比喻的遊戲」製造了一些簡單文句，不過不知這樣算不算有「詩意」，也不知有沒有文義上的矛盾、意象不妥或用詞不當。希望各位專家們，以文學批評的角度探討之，並給予我一些建議。感恩！

1.浪漫派的大海書寫著貝多芬的唐詩

2.以大自然的立可白抹去情緒的筆誤

3.人們總用沒電的手機聯絡青春

4.織貝殼成沙灘給窈窕的夏日穿上

在下不才，恐怕貽笑大方，尚請諸位專家海涵！

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